This is our rough cut that we have been working on for quite some time. There are still a few bits that need tweaking but we are almost finished. When we have finished the final cut, we will put it onto facebook and get some feedback from our friends on there to see what they think is good and what the think is not as good.
Bits we need to re-film
1) The scenes where Elle is walking along the street outside her house needs to be refilmed as there is no real relevance to it and we need to make it a little more interesting with more frequent cuts so it fits the music.
2) The scene in which Elle says 'Ignorance is your new best friend' needs to be refilmed as the lighting changes quite drastically in this scene from being outside to inside, making it look rather light and happy whereas the atmosphere should be a little more melancholy.
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